tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5028095877472189968.post2634514146688705349..comments2024-02-14T13:15:22.900-05:00Comments on The Word Mechanic: First draftThe Grandpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08548802274156524456noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5028095877472189968.post-16838517214579243942010-02-14T17:39:35.392-05:002010-02-14T17:39:35.392-05:00There you go again, word mechanic-ing....There you go again, word mechanic-ing....♥ Brajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693196044262677095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5028095877472189968.post-51924443807032969212010-02-11T16:22:50.778-05:002010-02-11T16:22:50.778-05:00It speaks to me of love, longing, caring; givers a...It speaks to me of love, longing, caring; givers and recipients of love being in different worlds (as is often the case with parent & child); it speaks of not being comforable in one's own skin (as if often the case of poets who tell the story).<br /><br />Most important, it provides the reader with a small yet vivid picture.Charles Kinnairdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07651225996573989932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5028095877472189968.post-76269751609725825702010-02-11T05:30:36.887-05:002010-02-11T05:30:36.887-05:00This is a lovely poem. It as resonances of fairy ...This is a lovely poem. It as resonances of fairy tales. You have captured such a haunting melancholy and longing in the beauty of your words. A rare sensibility.Elisabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04015624747225433940noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5028095877472189968.post-22235824618956878652010-02-10T21:53:13.551-05:002010-02-10T21:53:13.551-05:00Magic!
Aloha, Friend
Comfort SpiralMagic!<br /><br /><br /><br />Aloha, Friend<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Comfort Spiral</a>Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5028095877472189968.post-6557118788973617892010-02-10T18:35:51.078-05:002010-02-10T18:35:51.078-05:00You know I have trouble with poetry, so I'll t...You know I have trouble with poetry, so I'll take a stab at this. The injured swan turns into a beautiful girl. The reason? They wished for something to care for? A second shot at parenting. I really don't know, but I gave it my best.<br /><br />Can you tell why one of my worst graded classes was literature? My instructor said I was too logical in my thought process. True, but it served me well at work.<br /><br />Have a terrific day. :)Sandeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06785788498697004273noreply@blogger.com