There was a moment when he heard his lover’s voice
And thought he heard a language, that was more language
Than he had ever heard before. Like black granite
Dropping straight to the sea. Like wind on which gulls glide.
Her words were more varied than roses in sunlight,
Than the mottled maple outside his window when
The sky’s light lay parallel to the earth. And why,
He asked, had he not heard it before? Heard only
Filtered expressions of common speech? The next day
In a boat on the lake he listened to the lap
Of waves from a dying wake. Heard a cicada’s
Hum winding in the August air. Watched schooling bass
Churn the water no more than a pole’s reach away.
He lay down, his face to the sun, and tried staring
At it through the mesh in his hat. That night he walked
The concession area past where swimmers splashed
In the afternoon. At the end of the pier, two
Men sat in an anchored boat, their light a halo
On the silent water, and he heard it again.
In their talk, their words like ice on the quiet lake.
Originally published in A Matter of Mind, Foothills Publishing, 2004.
© copyright 2004, 2009 the Grandpa at The Word Mechanic Blog.All rights reserved.
Thank you, WM. I needed that today.
ReplyDeletePearl
Is their/your life, their love and their lady the sea? :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful..I want to be on that boat staring through the mesh of my hat.
Peace - Rene
Damn you're good...I posted a poem today and thought of you....so good to see you posting :) xo
ReplyDeleteHe rocked the house with this one :-) Thanks for joining in tonight with us too.
ReplyDeleteBeautifull poem, smooth, well writen, soft.
ReplyDeleteI was thinking that probably the silent river said much more than his lover did with his "language expressing it all"
Lovely.. it is a poetic Sunday full of beautiful poetry.. Reading simultaneously on your blog and Braja's.
ReplyDeleteStoppin' by...nothing clever enough to write...
ReplyDeleteThis was so beautiful... like music to my ears.
ReplyDeleteA lovely word-landscape with tiny human figures.
ReplyDeleteAloha-
Comfort Spiral
Give the man -- our wordsmith, poet -- a standing ovation!
ReplyDeleteThis was gorgeous, and a great end to the day! Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteHey G, just checking in on you and seeing how ya doing tonight :-)
ReplyDeleteHey Grandpa! How are you?
ReplyDeleteHey G has a bunch of schooling bass did ya bring your fishing poles gurls :-))
ReplyDeleteor your red pen :-))
ReplyDeleteI didn't but I'll go get one of Jody's bass poles.
ReplyDeleteGot my pole and bait! Bet I can beat cha' to the fishin' hole!!!
ReplyDeleteTell me about this red pen.
ReplyDeleteYou don't mind crickets do you amy I brought a bunch
ReplyDeletedude can write and if you can't he can correct your booty...LOL
ReplyDeleteI think red ink is kinda damaging to the self esteem. Can we use purple or something a little more uplifting?
ReplyDeleteCrickets are the best!!! I used to fish with my Grandpa, crickets, minnows, worms, liver. . . all the good stuff
ReplyDeleteGrandpa, this is beautiful poetry!
ReplyDeleteI don't know why I haven't been here before!
I think I just fell in love! :)
2 men sitting in a boat with halo's hummm reminds me of a helmet story I have heard of
ReplyDeleteI can even take my own fish off the hook!! Pretty good for a girl huh?
ReplyDeleteuhmmm Pastor.. YOU are taken remember !!! sheeeszzz do I have to remind you of everything
ReplyDeleteI am NOT touching liver, or worms! And I am not killing a cricket by piercing it through the heart to catch a fish!
ReplyDeleteA helmet would definately be needed and a life vest!!!! Maybe those little swim arm floaty things!
ReplyDeleteAmy you are too funny! Does a purple pen make your self-esteem feel better?
ReplyDeleteme too Amy but I use a towel and needle nose pliers I don't do slime to well
ReplyDeleteBut don't tell *her I said that, she's sensitive when it comes to her swimming witht he helmet. It is heavy you know!
ReplyDeleteDar, have you written a comment in the last five minutes. . . caused I just refreshed and you ain't here!
ReplyDeleteoooh purple is my most favorite sharpie to use :-)
ReplyDeletedon't geaux all girlie Pastor
OH. . . yeah. . . . you probably should remind me. . . . it's that helmet problem. . .
ReplyDeleteuhmmmm I am like in between you and amy.. ooooooooooooLOL
ReplyDeleteyou two are so typical.
ReplyDeleteEWWW, slime
EWWWW, worms
Just give the darn things and I will bait them for you!
Wouldn't want you to get a little worm guts on those pretty little fingers now would we.
Darsden, really, a towel? I'm shocked!
Oh The Places We Could Go. . . .
ReplyDeleteRemember that book by Dr. Suess, Dar?
who's weaving a tangled web here? Boy are people gonna talk now!
ReplyDeleteyep I was going to but I thought an hour already of that helmet talking would have been enough
ReplyDeleteamy I love the swimmies idea
amy I bait my hooks with pliers if I use worms they are just really gross.
ReplyDeletegurl you should know I carry a big spoon for stirring
It helps keep the helmet above water
ReplyDeleteOh. . . I'm girlie alright!
ReplyDeleteIs the ground soft beside the lake where we are fishing?
I don't want to sink in my heels!
Oh, and don't laugh at my pink tackle box! BTW, it has some make up inside . . . . just in case my face gets all shiny in the sun.
it's been awhile for dr. Suess for me...where ya wanna go
ReplyDeletePlier? I'm surprised! Just didn't picture you a kinda of girl afraid to get your hands dirty.
ReplyDeleteEspecially with all that stirring you do!
yes but just watch the hill, don't want you tumbling down HEAD first
ReplyDeleteDuh. . . it was about that comment you left about being in the middle. . .
ReplyDeleteOh wait. . . you wanna borrow my helmet?
oh they get dirty..but not with fish or worm guts..
ReplyDeleteG is going to have a fit he missed his own roast
ReplyDeleteOkay. . . so we went and got Chinese carry out and I swear to everything holy there is a lizard tail in my soup!
ReplyDeleteNow. . . Darsden. . . that we are back. . . I am on the "slow' computer so how is it that I am managing to keep up? hmmmmmm
Maybe someone else needs a helmet. . . Amy. . . .
I mix and stir...poke and ping...
ReplyDeleteI KNOW YOU DIDN'T!!!
ReplyDeleteYeah! Where in the world is G?
ReplyDeleteOMGosh you didn't get her a matching one...dang gina ..tightwad...poor amy
ReplyDeletepoke?
ReplyDeleteping?
ReplyDeleteDar- can we stop and have a moment of prayer for the PASTOR's Attitude!!
ReplyDeleteI love Chinese and I wasn't invited...lizards are good for fishing too
ReplyDeleteyou know the Mongolian chicken isn't chicken..LOL I sure do love that dingo monolian though...
ReplyDeletelet me guess you will hold the lizard with your bare hands for fishing won't you?
ReplyDeleteLet's pray: "Dear Lord. . . baby jesus. . . all 8 lbs, gold diaper pens. . . Amy doesn't like my attitude. IN fact, Amy doesn't like my helmet either. . . .In fact, do you think Amy likes anything? Could we change her mind? Amen."
ReplyDeleteshe could use a lil adjustment... attitude and helmet wise I think it's gotten too tight again..
ReplyDeleteThat chicken is either deep fried pursian or Crispy Kitty. . . not sure which~
ReplyDeleteOh Lord. . . here we go again. The lights in that helmet just sparked and I think there is a short. . . .do I see smoke?
ReplyDeleteI think i smell buring hair
ReplyDeleteHey wait! do you smell that smoke?
ReplyDeleteWhy is my head getting hot?
LOL now that was funny..
ReplyDeleteAmy I won't kill lizards for fishing I fish with them rubber lizards and rubber worms now.
We haven't had crickets since Katrina so I had to adjust my fishing somewhat I also throw all the fish back...they are my friends
Do you think if we throw some water on her she will melt?
ReplyDeleteAnd. . . I can't feel my fingers. . . and they are purple. . . circulation being cut off from my head down!
ReplyDeleteCan someone please get those pliers and pry this off my head!!!!!
OMGosh...I need depends on that one... I smell it too...it's a burning
ReplyDeleteNO JOKE??? Katrina killed the crickets??? I guess i never thought about that
ReplyDeletepurple IS my favorite color
ReplyDeleteDar, are you serious? You really don't have crickets since Katrina?
ReplyDeleteI am being serious for a minute. That is really wild and sad.
Have mercy Lord, put the Pastor out.. you set the bush on fire, but don't burn our pastor down...
ReplyDeleteDid she take all the insects and little creatures or just the crickets?
ReplyDeleteThe bush is on fire? Oh CRAP!
ReplyDeleteNOW we really are in trouble!
ReplyDeleteI thought it was just my head!
ReplyDeleteOkay. . . now let me go pray I think I'm gonna get smoted for that one!
Yes, totally serious. WE lost the 3 places you could get them. They haven't been rebuilt one is almost completed..YES I am talking 4 years later. It is still very sad hear...all you hear is about New Orleans They at least had houses and building left...flooded but left. HERE we have nothing for 32 miles long...4 blocks deep..no joke.
ReplyDeleteI refuse to pay 50cents a piece at pet smart for a cricket
Can't you go get them out of the yard?
ReplyDeleteI thought you meant they got drowned out or something?
ReplyDeleteWe NEVER paid for crickets! We went out before the crack of dawn and caught them ourselves.
ReplyDeleteShe wiped out alot but brought in some really new strange looking critters from the islands out there. We now have these lizards that look like the kind you can buy in the pet store...the spiney ones can't come up with the name
ReplyDeleteI thought you meant Katrina killed out all the cricket population, not the buildings where they were sold.
ReplyDeleteAnd that is seriously sad about the hurricane there. Dar I had no idea.
ReplyDeletecan I borrow the helmet or is is totally melted to the pastors head now?
ReplyDeleteDon't do reptiles!! That is freaky! I can't imagine how terrible that was!
ReplyDeleteNot the same kind of crickets, yard crickets are black..fishing crickets are brown. You could get 100 crickets for 3 bucks last you 2 days. Unless you leave them outside and the birds get them...talk about mutilated.... and if you bring them in the mole hole like I did because I saw what the bird did to them...then you get a lil snake in your house trying to get them..NO JOKE
ReplyDeleteOh. . .dear. . . . lord. . . . you would think Amy and i are having a conversation out loud with these comments we are leaving the are identical. . . . sheez. . .
ReplyDeleteAmy get off my wave length . . . . .find a new channel for a minute. . . .
Dar. . . it's true. . . after 18 years. . . . you start thinking the same things. . . . .
That whole island lizard thing is creepy. . . are they cute?
I love cute lizards.
Every place I grew up in all the different houses, none exist!
ReplyDeleteOK, that does it!!! NEVER coming to visit you!!!! DON'T DO REPTILES!!!! Snake IN the house!! AHHH NO!!!
ReplyDeleteyes but these are really cool looking ones
ReplyDeletethey look like like dinosaurs
Yes, I am sure 18 years you don't even have to start the sentence or speak to finish it..you just know!
ReplyDeletemy fortune in my fortune cookie says "There are many new opportunities that are being presented to you"
ReplyDeleteWHATEVER. . . NONE OF THEM BETTER HAVE TO DO WITH SNAKES!!!!
I think ya'll both totally Rock!
ReplyDeleteHey dar,
ReplyDeleteWE have grandpa almost to 100 comments!
Where we going after this?
well don't keep your crickets inside and you won't have any of those snakes!
ReplyDeleteDar - our house is so quiet. We don't even have to speak at all really, we just read each other's thoughts
ReplyDeleteThe only cricket I have inside is the die cutter in the scrap booking room
ReplyDeleteWhen I go to work, I have to remember to speak. People get so angry because I forget they can't read my mind.
ReplyDeleteoh, but I have a wii totally rocked out you can play with :-) 2 ponds in my front yard stocked with bass and brim... fire pits, swimming pools, movie stars
ReplyDeleteYeah about that mind reading thing. . . . sometimes it would be easier if you would at least grunt when you point to something. . . .
ReplyDeleteThat gets on my nerves.
Thanks Dar - we think you Rock too!! Hey we should start a band!!!!
ReplyDeleteawesome Girls thank you both for attending G's first roast :-)) I had a blast with ya'll tonight
ReplyDeletebetter than a growl pastor
ReplyDeleteDar. . . we will still come down there! She ain't scared of lizards.
ReplyDeletegoodnight ladies...goodnight G
ReplyDeleteAre we done here?
ReplyDeletegoodnight billybob, sueEllen
ReplyDeletegoodnight!
ReplyDeleteNight John boy
ReplyDeleteI wish ya'll would ...we would pass a good time to quote my cajun pop
ReplyDeleteCongrats Grandpa. . . you've just been roasted!
ReplyDeleteI really wish you could have been here!
you said you were leaving at a 100 I take a pastor at her word
ReplyDeletesweet dreams all :-)
ReplyDeleteLooks like you were Dar-roasted, Grandpa :)))
ReplyDeleteDAMN. Wish I'd been here. Thanks, Ladies. That was fun reading. Next time, wake me up first,
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